I am so excited to have Carl Brush stop by today. Okay, Carl, take it away.......
Thanks so very much, Penny, for inviting me to appear on Penny’s Tales and to give the world a
peek at what goes on in my wandering mind. Since I don’t mention my newly
released historical thriller The Second
Vendetta in my piece below, let me say something about it here. Whoops, I
just did, didn’t I? Well, now that you know that much we’ll take a short
intermission while you go to http://amzn.to/PXmxt8
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Ok, now that that’s done, we can move on to something unique
for your edification and delight.
Making Your Story Sing
We’re always looking for ways to
pull our readers into the tales we tell. Basic writing 1A instructs us to
engage all the senses, to give the audience things to see, touch, taste, hear,
and smell; and for sure that technique’s essential. However, it seems to me we
often neglect a powerful ancillary tool for engaging nearly all those senses at
once and evoking floods of emotion at the same time.
Nothing arouses our feelings more
intensely than music. There’s the “our song,” a mere bar or two of which can
reawaken those sensations from the sweet (mostly) days of courtship. Four notes
of “Pomp and Circumstance” puts you back in your high school or college cap and
gown. Those gut responses are the reason that it profits music companies to
endlessly rerun commercials for the “oldies” of whatever decade, or that PBS
uses those “doo-wop” specials to attract audiences on pledge nights. We should
get in on the act.
Of course, short of inserting a
sound file in our e-books or attaching a CD to our print copies, there’s no way
to get Sinatra’s voice to burst out of our pages. However, we can help our
readers to do it for us.
We all have at least a passing
acquaintance with hundreds, maybe thousands, of melodies. Who doesn’t know at
least a snippet of “Itsy-Bitsy Spider” or “The Wheels on the Bus?” Folk/popular
songs such as “This Land is Your Land,” or “You Are My Sunshine,” are familiar
to nearly everyone. Fewer people know “Memories” from Cats or “Music of the Night” from Phantom of the Opera, but millions do. You can add your own titles
to the catalog. Just find a reason to include a few lines of a chorus in your
description of a scene or plant them in a character’s thoughts—Music from a
stereo or from elevator muzak or from the humming of a passing stranger. You
know what will happen. Your readers will begin to hear that melody in their
heads. You’ll have planted one of those ear worms—a song in your brain you
can’t get rid of—and you’ll have engaged your audience at the most elemental
level.
Jung talked about the sense of
smell as the most integrative, the one that catalyzed all the other senses and
the memory into action. I’m timid about contradicting the master of myth and
psychology, but I do have the temerity to suggest that music is at least as
powerful, entering through the ear (and by extension they eye via the printed
page) and suffusing our entire beings with memory and emotion (Maybe Jung never
heard “The Duke of Earl?” or “Twist and Shout?”). If you can do all that with a
few words, why wouldn’t you? It’s surely worth a try.
Biography—Carl
R. Brush
Carl Brush has
been writing since he could write, which is quite a long time now.
His historical thriller, The Second Vendetta has just been
released by Solstice publishing, and a prequel, The Maxwell Vendetta is scheduled for release by Solstice in early
2013.
Journals in
which his work has appeared include The
Summerset Review, Right Hand Pointing, Blazevox, Storyglossia, Feathertale, and The Kiss Machine. He has
participated in the Napa Valley Writers’ Conference, the Squaw Valley Community
of Writers, and the Sewanee Writers’ Conference.
Carl lives with
his wife in Oakland, California, where he enjoys the blessings of nearby
children and grandchildren.
Wow,Carl. Duke of Earl goes back a long, long time. I giggled when I read that, I remember it too. Yes, there is a lot of songs that most have heard and thanks for the idea of using them.
ReplyDeleteNice post, and congrats on your writing career.
Lorrie Unites-Struiff
Great topic! I completely understand what you mean about a song or piece of music taking you back to one memory or another, but I never thought to use that idea in one of my stories to affect the READER! I love it! Thanks Carl :)Oh, and thanks for the memories ;)
ReplyDeleteHey Lorrie and Andrea....thanks for stopping by. Wasn't his post a goodie1 Some great ideas....
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